Ребята, всем привет! Скоро сдаю IELTS в первый раз. Если с первыми двумя частями всё более менее понятно, то по writing я вовсе не понимаю, на какой балл рассчитывать. Ещё такой вопрос вроде глупый, но нигде информации не нашла. Дают ли лист на writing для черновика или составления плана? Или надо сразу писать на листе с ответами? Буду очень благодарна, если посмотрите, моё эссе, на что нужно обратить внимание и как его улучшить? Some children have friends that can influence them. What do you think parents should do about it? Give your own opinion and examples. In all world parents always worry about their children and want to give children good life. Off course, the right circle of friends is very important for a person, because the children learn not only from teacher or parent, they also learn from their friends. It seems much easier to control child’s connect, when he is less than 7 years old. In this age the child spend most of time with parents or family. Also many children go to the preschool or kindergarten, when they also always have supervision from the teacher. So it is not so hard to limit friendship in this age, if parents think that communication is not good for child. For example, if friend bothers, beats or humiliates. That kind of communication need to be interrupt for good of child. It is more difficult to limit communication, when the child becomes older, between 7 and 12 years. Нe can choose with who he wants to be the friends. So it is important to teach children, that not all people who want to be friends with him, are making it in good intentions. Sometimes, for example, new friends just want to be closer with family’s money. It is very useful knowledge to be able discriminate good people from bad. And then earlier the child learns to choose right friends and then better for him. In particular, let child note, which friends play with him only when he have new toys or only when another friend is not there. Must difficult age from children is age older 12 years. There are many persons who may to suggest him drugs or alcohol. Therefore, parents must talk with children about danger, that brings use of drugs or alcohol in this age. Often teenagers have difficulties in relationships with parents and think that friends more important than parents. So it is important to keep a touch with the child and know with what kind of person the child communicate. In conclusion, parents do not have to limit their children about friend, but parents have to teach children, that it is very important to have a good friend.